Sunday, November 13, 2011

November Open Prompts

1973. An effective literary work does not merely stop or cease; it concludes. In the view of some critics, a work that does not provide the pleasure of significant closure has terminated with an artistic fault. A satisfactory ending is not, however, always conclusive in every sense; significant closure may require the reader to abide with or adjust to ambiguity and uncertainty. In an essay, discuss the ending of a novel or play of acknowledged literary merit. Explain precisely how and why the ending appropriately or inappropriately concludes the work. Do not merely summarize the plot.

            No matter how well-written a piece of literature is, or how absorbed readers are in the text, there is always one thing looming in the back of the readers’ minds: the end. The end of a work is crucial in that it leaves the reader with final thoughts to ponder, or something conclusive that ties up the work. In Albee’s “The American Dream”, he uses a somewhat ambiguous and inconclusive ending in order to affect the meaning of his play. In “The American Dream” by Edward Albee, an inconclusive ending is used in order to appropriately end the work and contribute to the meaning of the play.
            The end of Albee’s play concludes in a seemingly odd place that does not leave readers with a resolution but instead some ideas to think about. The play ends with Mommy, Daddy, the Young Man, and Grandma- although now invisible to all except the audience. The play ends in an odd place because the Young Man has just been introduced as a very deep and troubled character. In the Young Man’s long monologue towards the end, he explains that he “can feel nothing” and he is only what you see and “will always be thus.”  Through this character, Albee is making a statement about the new “American Dream” and how it is shallow and superficial. Although the Young Man’s character answers some questions about the mutilated child of Mommy and Daddy, it also poses new questions that are not answered. Will Mommy and Daddy find imperfections in the Young Man and treat him as they did his twin? Have Mommy and Daddy finally achieved the satisfaction they were constantly pursuing? Grandma concludes the work by saying “Let’s leave things as they are right now...while everybody’s got what he wants…or everybody’s got what he thinks he wants.” This explains that the play will be ended at this point where it appears that everyone is happy and makes the reader wonder how long this happiness will last and what will become of the strange family.
            The inconclusive ending of Albee’s play is appropriate because it contributes to the meaning of the play. A motif throughout the work is Mommy and Daddy’s constant pursuit of satisfaction. The two often state that they just “can’t get satisfaction” these days, although are temporarily subdued by consumer purchases such as Mommy’s beige or wheat hat debacle. The syntax Albee uses in the repetition of “satisfaction” shows its importance to the meaning of the work; American society is constantly pursuing material satisfaction but can never be truly satisfied because it is so superficial. The ending of the play therefore contributes to the meaning. While Mommy and Daddy are satisfied at the moment because they’ve got something new and shiny to obsess over, Grandma’s lines make the readers think that this is only temporary and the Young Man will be replaced just like everything else. This also makes readers wonder about society and whether Americans will ever be able to find satisfaction or if they will constantly be in pursuit of such and never truly be satisfied.
            By ending the play in such a way that poses more questions to the readers than are actually answered, Albee effectively ends his play and enforces the meaning of the work. Readers are left to wonder about the family as well as their own values and the values of the American society they live in.

3 comments:

  1. Your opener is really good. You have all three of the necessary pieces-interesting open, backstory, and thesis. However, I think your last sentence “In “The American Dream by…” is unnecessary because you are essentially saying the same thing in the line previous.
    I'm impressed that you were able to take direct quotes out during an open prompt.
    This is a very well written essay. Your thesis answers the prompt, and your essay follows the plan that you set out with your thesis. Furthermore, you provide very relevant plot points and explicitly explain the meaning of these techniques in order to connect it to your thesis. I was originally surprised that the essay had only two body paragraphs, but your form of set-up followed by convincing argument works well in the situation.
    One thing that I think you should change is your own diction. There are a few words that you repeat several times within paragraphs, and this detracts from the flow of the essay. Also, I suggest adding in your conclusion that Miller’s purpose was to point out the flaws of society and especially to make his audience think introspectively. Something like that might make more clear the connection between your sentences in the last paragraph.
    Great Job Kim!

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  2. The introductory paragraph covers everything required, but like Agney says: your last sentence is redundant. Your thesis statement leads into two body paragraphs, which you've explained in great detail. They both work nicely. I like your use of quotes; they help the piece but do not summarize. I also like the way you use rhetorical questions and then mention how Albee questions readers. Overall, this essay effectively answers the prompt.

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  3. Intro- Good! I really liked it. Maybe add a little more DIDLS

    1st- Good! Nice examples/evidence. :) I like how you asked questions.

    2nd - I really like your point in this paragraph! I think you're right, the ending does contribute to the play

    Overall- good! I think you did a good job in adding a few quotes and examples. you explained them very well. Keep up the good work Kim!

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